As you probably know this Sunday is Father’s Day, and to celebrate Father’s Day and show our love for our fathers our class have made poems for our dads.
Our class went around to look at all the book week doors. They were all amazing but I had to choose my favourite. Apart from our door my favourite door is the bully on the bus because it was very artistic and creative, bye all the ripped up pieces of paper. It was also clear what the book was because it had the title in the picture. It looked like a hole class effort and not just one or two people. Here is a picture of what the door looked like.
Welcome back, so this week I’ve started writing a new story but it’s no ordinary story it a science fiction story. If your wondering what a science fiction story is I will now explain, a science fiction story is when the problem or solution involves some sort of science. My story is about two kids called Murph and bonnie and are learning about space and planets, Murph wants to get a better idea of space so he makes a time travel machine. When Murph and Bonnie trie out the time machine they get stuck in a crazy land called vontenflex.
I hope you all had a good holiday. At the moment iv been reading the book Born to run it by Cathy Freeman. The book is about her life as a child and when she was growing up and about training for the Olympics. Also it has some photos and a sentence or 2 about the photo. I haven’t finished the book yet but I’m really enjoying it.h
On Wednesday the 18th of May I participated in interschool netball and 5/6s went. I was in the A team and we did really well I played in Center. We won 3 out of 4 games and made the final unfortunately we lost the final to Gisborne. The B team came third nearly second and the mixed team didn’t make the final.
At our school all the year 3’s to 6’s participated in cross country. I had heaps of fun and I came 3rd in my division. The top 10 in each division go to districts,the year 3’s and 4’s did 2k and the 5’s and 6’s did 3k. It was a great experience and there was lots of really good runners there, I did the 3k run for the girls.
At our school we do a thing called pac day it’s when all the houses sing there song. The houses are Lee,Hurst,Devlin and Galloway. I’m in and lee and lee won the competition.
This is our chant
Come on Lee we are the team we’ve got talent and we’ve got speed we’ve got spirit we’ve got game to have fun is our aim Lee is every were you look Lees so hot your gonna cook come on down and give us a beat X2 4x slow clap 8x fast clap
I had lots of fun
Our class have been reaserching to find the optimal design for a paper plane. We watched a video with the world record holder in it telling us all his designs his name is Brian Collins.
What I learnt:
Persuasive writting is to persuade the reader that your side is better than the other you should make them think your side is better.In persuasive, writting it is important to remember to use interesting language and use persuasive techniques.
Here is an example of some persuasive writting in progress.